Sunday, February 13, 2011

Thinking About You...

I'm thinking about you like I'm crazy like Eminem is a little bit too shady, like Wayne's a little faded, like Jagger is a little bit... addicted? I'm thinking of you like Iverson's tats, but they don't seem to bring up his stats. I'm thinking of you like Artest thinks of taking  shots... during halftime? I'm thinking about you like pots think about food and potheads thinking about more food, like its the 60's again dude... I'm thinking about you like people should think about wonderful things and should have flings and strings and rings with that wonder thing. Like a person should  have feelings like their on top of the ceilings. I'm thinking about you like a poet thinks about rhymes, and thugs think about crimes and pennies and dimes, like watches think about their good... dependable hands. Like hands think about creating and hunters think about baiting and bloggers think about updating and critiques think about rating and haters think about... Disliking other people? Cause its so ironic that your like bionic and phonics another word for acoustic's... which doesn't make any sense, and if this poem makes sense then your probably hitting it a little to dense and if your not... maybe oneday I make it into my two cents cause baby I thought about it and me and you make sense.

5 comments:

  1. WWWWWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW this is the shit

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  2. waaay good.
    you must have copied and pasted from a website.
    way tooo good.

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  3. "Like hands think about creating and hunters think about baiting and bloggers think about updating and critiques think about rating and haters think about... Disliking other people?" Ha dude, this was awesome. Loved it. The whole piece was awesome, but that line stood out to me.

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  4. this is like a mixture of shakespeare and God

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  5. A mixture of Shakespeare and God. Yeah, that's what I was going to say.

    This was fun to read. Good rhymes and good surprises. I liked the Artest line and the line about potheads thinking about more food.

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